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    Question And it seems so far interesting... spotting mistakes, please!

    I answered a recruiter writing this e-mail, can someone check it spotting mistakes? Many Thanks in advance.

    Dear xxx

    Thank you for your e-mail and voice message.

    I am very interested in any international opportunity and the FASTCARD seems so far interesting.

    I understood from your voice message your are looking for experience in Credit and Debit Card payments and transactions, so I included in my CV some details about my expertise in Electronic Card environment. I hope it helps.

    Please, find my presentation in the attached CV.

    I hope to hear from you very soon and to be given the opportunity to present myself at an interview.

    Yours sincerely


    What do you reckon?

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    Re: And it seems so far interesting... spotting mistakes, please!

    Quote Originally Posted by SunMoon View Post
    I answered a recruiter writing this e-mail, can someone check it spotting mistakes? Many Thanks in advance.

    Dear xxx

    Thank you for your e-mail and voice message.

    I am very interested in any international opportunity and the FASTCARD seems so far interesting. You could use very interesting, instead of so far.

    I understood understand from your voice message that your you are looking for someone experienced in Credit and Debit Card payments and transactions. I have included in my attached CV some details about of my expertise in Electronic Card environment. I hope it this helps.

    Please, find my presentation in the attached CV.

    I hope to hear from you very soon and to be given the opportunity to present myself at an meet with you for a personal interview.

    Yours sincerely

    What do you reckon?

    Delete the underlined, and replace with the red.

    I am not a teacher.

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