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    Post Please correct the following sentences

    As we discussed, I am giving below the details of my proposal of salary revision of maintenance team.

    Please note that nowadays the living cost is too high and the current salary does not meet to our basic needs. People are struggling to survive with current salary.
    I humbly request you to kindly revise salary which will help them to support their basic needs in a comfortable way.

    Hope you understand their situation and will do the needful and oblige.

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    Exclamation Re: Please correct the following sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Annecy View Post
    As (we) discussed with you, I am giving below the details of my proposal for (of) salary revision of the maintenance team.

    Please note that nowadays the cost of living has gone up (is) too high and the current salary structure is inadequate (does not) to meet the (to our) basic needs. Consequently, People are really struggling hard for (to) survival with current salary.
    Therefore, I humbly request you to kindly revise the salary which will support to fulfill their basic needs and help them to lead life in a comfortable way.

    Hope you would understand their situation in doing (and will do) the needful and oblige.
    Delete underlined words in brackets.

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