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    please correct my text

    The schedule for PH60 will be slipped to end of March and no schedule for J78. Toby explained that many workers were absent after the CNY holidays which caused disrupt their planning on these rework goods
    Last edited by Zoe2008; 16-Feb-2009 at 16:56.

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    The schedule for PH60 will be slipped delayed to end of March and no schedule is planned for J78. Toby explained that many workers were absent after the CNY holidays which caused disruption of their planning plans on of these rework recycled or rebuilt goods
    Delete the underlined words, and replace with the red.

    I am not a teacher.

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    Re: please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    The schedule for PH60 will be slipped to end of March and no schedule for J78. Toby explained that many workers were absent after the CNY holidays which caused disrupt their planning on these rework goods
    The schedule for PH60 will be delayed until the end of March and there is no schedule for J78. Toby explained that many workers were absent after the CNY holidays, which disrupted plans for recycling these goods.

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