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    Question Some examples could be seen... check the grammar, please!

    Talking about my experience after the introduction I would say:

    Some examples could be seen from my experience in xxxx, a financial company of xxx group, where....

    Does it work?

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    Re: Some examples could be seen... check the grammar, please!

    Even though these experiences happened in the past, you are talking about them in the present, so you would say:

    Some examples can be seen

    or

    Some examples are able to be seen . . .

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    Exclamation Re: Some examples could be seen... check the grammar, please!

    Quote Originally Posted by SunMoon View Post
    Talking about my experience after the introduction I would say:

    Some examples could be seen from my experience in xxxx, a financial company of xxx group, where....

    Does it work?
    Experience means: understanding gained through doing something. So to make the sentence meaningful you have to specify that “something” as:
    "a surprising experience"; "painful experience ", “Management experience” OR “experience in project management/ project implementation” etc.
    So you can say: Some examples of my experience in project management could be seen while working with/in xxxx, a financial company of xxx group, where....

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