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Hi fellow believers
Please let me know whether the words in bold are correctly used? Is a comma needed after 'time'? Are there any other errors?
This time, we have published the memorial photograph collection of our High Priestís visit as a memento of the ceremony for the first anniversary of the establishment of the Kaimyo-in and the inauguration of the Hokkeko Kaimyo-in Chapter. I shall be very pleased if this book enables you to recall your sense of gratitude to our former High Priest Nikken Shonin and our current High Priest Nichinyo Shonin, and inspires you to maintain your joy and determination that you made during the Ceremony and Kick-off Meeting.
(Note: Kaimyo-in is the temple. Hokkeko is the title given to the believers.)