Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid.what extend do you agree or disagree?
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Develped countries has strong financial base and ofter assist poor countries. Although it can not sove the povery on the base, it help the poor countries to pass the tough period at least. At a short time make the country lead to fruition including the education ,industry, medical care. For the countries, they should establish the strongh systems which avoid the crruption spreading, be ensolved in political issues, and repaying stress. (at least 250 words. My God. who can give me more cues,to finish the essy...... I am crying)
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