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    please, correct

    Dear teachers,
    please, could you correct any mistakes in the following :

    In my position I was responsible for the quality of purchased parts. It included the approval of new parts according to the automotive directions, audits at suppliers, solving of complaints, participation in the quality meetings within the development phase.

    I work in the position of a quality engineer.
    I work in the position of the plant manager.

    The company produces parts for automotive industry, is certified according ISO TS, ISO 14001 and delivers directly to the final producers or to other suppliers.

    The plant is a production plant without its own sales, research and construction department.

    Thank you very much for your time K.

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    Re: please, correct

    Dear Katerina:

    Quote Originally Posted by katerina.pata View Post
    Dear teachers,
    please, could you correct any mistakes in the following :

    In my position I was responsible for the quality of purchased parts. This included the approval of new parts according to the automotive (directions)(specifications?), audits at (of?) suppliers, complaint resolution, and participation in the quality standards (?) meetings during the development phase (of ____?).

    (I work in the position of a quality engineer.
    I work in the position of the plant manager.) Do you currently work in these positions?
    If yes: I currently hold the positions of quality engineer and plant manager.

    If no: I have held the positions of quality engineer and plant manager.

    The company produces parts for the automotive industry, is certified according ISO TS, ISO 14001, and delivers directly to the final producers or to other suppliers.

    The plant is strictly a production site without its own sales, research or construction department.

    Thank you very much for your time K.
    I hope this is helpful,

    Petra

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    Re: please, correct

    Well, this is definitely VERY helpful for me..Petra, thank you so much!!!
    Katerina

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    Re: please, correct

    Quote Originally Posted by katerina.pata View Post
    Dear teachers,
    Please, could you correct any mistakes in the following?

    Okay, here's my pass at it:

    In my position, I was responsible for the quality of purchased parts. It included the approval of new parts according to the automotive directions, audits at suppliers, solving of complaints, and participation in the quality meetings within the development phase.

    I work in the position of xxx quality engineer.
    I work in the position of xxx plant manager.

    The company produces parts for the automotive industry, is certified according ISO TS, and ISO 14001, and delivers directly to the final producers or to other suppliers.

    The plant is a production plant without its own sales, research, or construction department.

    Thank you very much for your time. K.
    You're welcome!

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    Re: please, correct

    Charlie, THANK YOU very much for all the corrections and spending some of your valuable time on my problem.
    Thanks Katerina

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