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    Question help me find mistake

    Finding mistake
    Florida is famous for its tourist attractions.Its coastline offers with excellent white sand beaches. Furthermore, it has warm, sunny weather.
    Thank you.

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    #2

    Re: help me find mistake

    Two mistakes:

    Put a space between the period and "Its."

    Get rid of "with."


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    Re: help me find mistake

    Note the collocations:
    white sand beaches ( to distinguish it from black sand beaches on volcanic islands)

    and
    white sandy beaches/a white sandy beach (to distinguish these from, as found in some resorts in England) pebble beaches!


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    Re: help me find mistake

    Note the collocations:
    white sand beaches ( to distinguish them from black sand beaches on volcanic islands)

    and
    sandy beaches/a sandy beach (to distinguish these from, as found in some resorts in England) pebble beaches!

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