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    Question Is this sentence good?

    Hello!
    I'm writing a motivation letter to a European University and I'd like to ask if this sentence is correct... I'd be very grateful for an answer!

    This is the sentence:
    "Id like to get new experience, to improve my language skills and to learn European view on education, especially on that in the sphere of marketing."

    "...on that" is this right?

    Thanks in advance!


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    Re: Is this sentence good?

    Quote Originally Posted by Marilu (Russia) View Post
    Hello!
    I'm writing a motivation letter to a European University and I'd like to ask if this sentence is correct... I'd be very grateful for an answer!

    This is the sentence:
    "I would like to broaden my experience, to improve my language skills and to learn the European view on education, especially in the sphere of marketing."

    "...on that" is this right?

    Thanks in advance!
    When you write a formal letter, you need to take care of style too.

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