I am not the best at this and I am only mid way through my ENG 101 class but this is what I see that you might want to look back over.
Dieing---> should be dyeing
for ever----> forever
you have used only "ho" in one place that should be how.
thats is a starting word in one of your sentences that needs to be Cap.
I would say: one thing and another not one thing or another.
I think that is a grammer error .
Like I said I'm new at this I am just pointing out what I see.
Other than that I can say that the spelling is correct.
Student or Learner