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    The following email is to be sent to a boss for the situation explained in the email. Plz correct any mistakes.thanks

    Dear Jim,
    Tonight between 4 to 5 pm my coworker was on other duties and there was not anyboy to fill in for "X's" shift ( who is on vacation) that put me alone at the counter for more than hour. I thought I would just bring this to your attention because normally you bring in people for overtime to fill in any gap. I was not sure why there was not any body today.

    Thank You

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    Dear Jim,

    This evening, between 4 and 5 p.m., I was at the counter alone for more than hour, because the person scheduled to fill in for "X" did not show.

    I thought I would bring this to your attention because this is normally not the case.

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