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    Talking could you correct these sentences

    Could you pls read these sentences and correct mistakes.

    thanks


    The agency permanently employs 50 employees, and in the season that number amounts to 100 and more employees.

    Expansive development is a main characteristic of our agency from the beginning of our business conduct. An intense and constant growth of the number of guests using our services is a result of a determined and quality work.

    Our offer is based on intermediation in provision of private and hotel accommodation

    Our company's main goal is a satisfied guest - before, during and after using our services regardless of the complexity of their inquiry.


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    Smile Re: could you correct these sentences

    • Hello my name is Keyinna and yes I can correct your sentences... If you would like for me to correct your sentences I will ve sure to correct them for you.
    • But if u want them to be correct just... Email me or send me a message here,
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    Can u correct these sentences>
    1. yesterday did she go to the skating rink
    2. is u ready f0or the game,

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    Re: could you correct these sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by Pooh1212 View Post
    • Hello, my name is Keyinna and yes I can correct your sentences If you would like for me to correct your sentences I will be sure to correct them for you.
    • But if u want them to be corrected, just... Email me or send me a message here,
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    • Okay my email address is Keyinna@jokeemail.com or Keyinna@jokeemail.com either 1 will work.
    Can u correct these sentences>
    1. yesterday did she go to the skating rink I'll leave them for others
    2. is u ready f0or the game,


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    Re: could you correct these sentences

    is u ready f0or the game
    Lol, Noobs FTL, they think they speak 'leet' so uber but they suxxor
    Last edited by thod00; 07-Mar-2009 at 23:18.


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    Re: could you correct these sentences

    The agency permanently employs 50 employees, and in the season that number amounts to 100 and more employees.
    The agency employs 50 permanent staff. During the high season, this rises to to a 100 or more.

    Expansive development is a main characteristic of our agency from the beginning of our business conduct.
    Our agency has experienced continuous growth since its inception.

    An intense and constant growth of the number of guests using our services is a result of a determined and quality work.
    The rise in the number of customers using our services is due to the high quality of our work.

    Our offer is based on intermediation in provision of private and hotel accommodation
    We provide an intermediation service between guests, our customers, and the hotels.


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    Re: could you correct these sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by bepina View Post
    Could you pls read these sentences and correct mistakes.

    thanks


    The agency permanently employs 50 employees, and in the season that number increases to 100 and more employees.

    Expansive development is a main characteristic of our agency from the beginning of our business conduct. An intense and constant growth of the number of guests using our services is a result of a determined attention to quality work.

    Our offer is based on intermediation in provision of private and hotel accommodation can you explain what you mean by this phrase?

    Our company's main goal is a satisfied guest - before, during and after using our services regardless of the complexity of their inquiry.
    ..


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    Re: could you correct these sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by tareq10 View Post
    1. Did she go to the skating rink yesterday?
    2. Are you ready for the game?

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