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Why are apples and milk pig's property?
The Rebellion was carried out so that the farm production would be returned to the animals. It is a well-known fact that Humans represent the only land being who uses without produce a single thing. All this goes to show that the Rebellion was justified from that poor beasts which behaved as slaves towards Humans. However, a contradictory situation occurred. Every single drop of milk and apples are pigs ownership although there are cows and trees production! My own view of this is that all this goes against the Rebellion purposes.
On the one hand, why do these things belong to pigs and not to everybody? Of course, the vitamins they contain are essential to their brain development. However, every animal who owns this organ deserves to develop it to its maximum level. Compared with pigs, dogs are not so idiot! That animal race which manipulates the others forces its company on them and retorts that pigs should be that superior quality food owners to see the farm production through. This is a lie. Pigs canít do a single thing without the other animal. They are the production basis and they deserve exactly the same food as pigs.
Therefore, there is no good reason to explain that incomprehensible situation. Apples and milk are every animal ownership in reality. Arguments which prove the opposite donít exist. This is only pigs complaint because they are so smart that they behave like Humans. Do animals want to come back to their initial slave position? I donít think soÖ
When the animals take over the farm, they think it is the start of a better life. Their dreams are of a world where all animals are equal and all property is shared. But soon the pigs take control and one of them, Napoleon, becomes the leader of all the animals. One by one the principles of the revolution are abandoned until the animals have even less freedom than before.
Why do the apples and the milk belong to the pigs?
Returned to the animals?
Every single drop of milk and every apple was claimed by the pigs.