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    #1

    Wink heart is beating so quickly and I canít calm down at all.

    Hello~ Can you help me say this naturally please?

    A: Hey, can you be here right now?
    Burglar came into house, made inside house all mixed up.
    I feel so unstable, canít stay alone.

    B: Oh, are you ok?

    A: No, my heart is beating so quickly and I canít calm down at all.

    (B came and stayed with A over 5 hours.)

    A: Thanks for being with me.
    ⓐNow I feel safe and I can calm down myself.
    ⓑNow I feel stable.
    Last edited by flytothesky; 08-Mar-2009 at 05:34.

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    Re: heart is beating so quickly and I canít calm down at all.

    Quote Originally Posted by flytothesky View Post
    Hello~ Can you help me say this naturally please?

    A: Hey, can you come over right now?
    A burglar came into the house and 1) trashed the place; 2) vandalized it; 3) turned the place upside down.
    or: My house was burgled and whoever did it really made a mess.
    I feel so unstable (or: nervous), I canít stay alone.

    B: Oh, are you ok?

    A: No, my heart is beating so quickly (or: racing) and I canít calm down at all.I'm a total wreck!

    (B came and stayed with A over 5 hours.)

    A: Thanks for staying with me.
    ⓐNow I feel safe and I can calm down myself.
    ⓑNow I feel stable.
    I feel much calmer now. I think I'll be ok by myself.
    I hope this is helpful. I hope even more that this is not a true story!

    Petra


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    Re: heart is beating so quickly and I canít calm down at all.

    Quote Originally Posted by flytothesky View Post
    Hello~ Can you help me say this naturally please?

    A: Hey, can you be here right now?
    A burglar broke into my house, ands has trashed the place. I am really upset, and don't want to be on my own.


    B: Oh, are you ok?

    A: No, my heart is beating incredibly fast and I canít calm down at all.

    (B came and stayed with A over 5 hours.)

    A: Thanks for being with me. I feel so much safer and I think I wilkl now be ok on my own.
    ⓐNow I feel safe and I can calm down myself.
    ⓑNow I feel stable.

    I do hope this is only fiction. If not, did you call the police?

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