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    Corect my letter

    You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
    Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college.
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    My letter :

    Dear Sir/Madam,
    Iím writing to express my dissatisfaction with my current roommate.
    We live at room 422, in North Camp.
    Steve Clark my roommate always has friend visiting. They stay until midnight and speak loudly and make a lot of noise. He also has parties twice a week which usually ends in the next morning. He often borrows my things without asking me.
    I used to sleep early. I canít sleep with a lot of noise. I couldnít accept this situation any longer. Its bother me.
    I several times spoke with Steve, but it didnít work. We had a lot of argument and in February 12 he hit me. Simon and Julia saw that you can ask them.
    Next term, I have very important exam and I must really study hard.
    This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room or roommate next term.
    Iím looking forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours faithfully
    Nokia2600


    • Join Date: Oct 2006
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    Re: Corect my letter

    Quote Originally Posted by Nokia2600 View Post
    You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
    Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. [Please correct my letter for me}
    -----------------------------------------------------------------------
    My letter :

    Dear Sir/Madam,
    I’m writing to express my dissatisfaction with my current roommate.
    We live at room 422, in North Camp.
    Steve Clark my roommate always has friends visiting. They stay until midnight and speak loudly and make a lot of noise. He also has parties twice a week which usually end in the early morning. He often borrows my things without asking me.
    I am used to going to sleep early. I can’t sleep with a lot of noise. I cannot bear this situation any longer. It is now affecting my studies.
    I have several times spoken with Steve, but it didn’t work. We had a lot of argument and on February 12 he hit me as was witnessed by Simon and Julia; You may ask them for confirmation..
    Next term, I have very important exam and I must really study hard.
    This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room or roommate next term.
    I look forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours faithfully
    Nokia2600
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