VividJailbird : please, pretty please, try to avoid texting-type abbreviations like 'cuz' for 'because'. You'll be surprised, English not being your native language, that these will slip out in formal situations, whether in speaking or writing, when they will make the least favourable impression. Get used to 'turning them on and off' - get used to using them when texting, and in a 'formal' setting (such as here, where we are all wanting to encourage English you can be proud of) use correct English and spelling (unless you are really conscious that you are doing it!)
As for your query: why not write the whole letter and post that. Then, with the combined efforts of forum members, you should have a very impressive missive.
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