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    correct words to use

    I was struggling with a/some force that had possessed me. Desperate, my husband admitted/took me to the nearest hospital. On the way, I was struggling in pain as the muscles on my back contracted weirdly.

    I think either 'a' or 'some' is ok.

    I think it should be 'took' and not 'admitted.'.

    I think 'weirdly' is not correct, but cannot think of a better word.

    Thanks a lot.

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    Re: correct words to use

    Quote Originally Posted by Tan Elaine View Post
    I was struggling with a/some force that had possessed me. Desperate, my husband admitted/took me to the nearest hospital. On the way, I was struggling in pain as the muscles on my back contracted weirdly.

    I think either 'a' or 'some' is ok. Hi, Tan! I agree. "Some" is more mysterious, "a" is more common. "Some" implies that it was a strange force. It fits with "possessed."

    I think it should be 'took' and not 'admitted.'. Yes. He took you there, the hospital staff admitted you.

    I think 'weirdly' is not correct, but cannot think of a better word. If you were "possessed" by "some" force, "weirdly" could be a good word choice.

    Thanks a lot.
    You're welcome!

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