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    Unhappy Grammar in the sentences?

    Actually I am quiet upset with the grammar of the following sentences.......I am not able to mark the errors kindly reply me if there any asap.

    1)What job Kopec actually does?

    2) Which membership Kopec would be getting after completion of the training?

    3)Has procurement anything to do with anti-fraud project?

    4) GPS open ways to its trainees for government recruitment

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    Re: Grammar in the sentences?

    1)What job does Kopec actually have/do?

    2) Which membership will Kopec be getting/receive after completion of the training?

    3)Has procurement anything to do with the anti-fraud project?

    4) GPS opens ways for its trainees for government recruitment.


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    Smile Re: Grammar in the sentences?

    Thank you so much....


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    Re: Grammar in the sentences?

    What job Kopec actually does?

    What job does Kopec actually have?
    What work does Kopec actually do?

    2) Which membership Kopec would be getting after completion of the training?
    What qualification would Kopec receive after completion of training?

    3)Has recruitment/selection anything to do with the anti-fraud project?
    Be careful with the word 'procurement'. Are you sure you mean that?

    4) GPS opens the way to its trainees for government recruitment


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    Unhappy Urgent !!! Grammar in the sentences?

    Once again I need your help....kindly check the grammatical mistakes in the following sentences and summary. It's my assignment and I am supposed to submit it asap...

    1 Leah Betts died because of drinking too much water.
    2 Mark Hennessy was over-dosed because of MDMA
    3 The writer started going to Heaven,Londonís gay club in late 80s
    4 Professor Nutt was often quoted for his comparing of ecstacy with dance
    5 The writer had passed by 17 years in rehabilitation unit.
    6 Pet Shop Boys hadnít provided the soundtrack to the writer.
    7 Later, writer was moved to Guy's hospital because all of his vital organs packed up.
    8 Writerís friend took her to hospital in her car


    The writer talked about his past and his passion for dances. He had gone at such an extent for dancing that he could not able to stop himself even taking drugs; just to acquire a complete pleasure for dancing of which he called ecstasy. But time never remains the same, a tragedy took place and an enthusiastic dancing guy of London became paralysed/bed-ridden because of the selfish pleasure of dancing. He was kept under treatment for prolonged period of time .He himself couldnít recall properly what had actually happened to him, except the fact that he was over-dosed. Not just him but his mum, brother and friends had also suffered. Sadly, he was also transferred from walk to wheel-chairs. His extremity of selfish pleasure had ruined/ changed his life forever.


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    Question Urgent !!! Grammar in the sentences?

    Hi, once again I need your help , kindly check the grammatical mistakes in the following sentences and summary.........this is my assignment and I am supposed to submit it asap....


    1 Leah Betts died because of drinking too much water.
    2 Mark Hennessy was over-dosed because of MDMA
    3 The writer started going to Heaven,Londonís gay club in late 80s
    4 Professor Nutt was often quoted for his comparing of ecstacy with dance
    5 The writer had passed 17 years in rehabilitation unit.
    6 Pet Shop Boys hadnít provided the soundtrack to the writer.
    7 Later, writer was moved to Guy's hospital because all of his vital organs packed up.
    8 Writerís friend took her to hospital in her car


    The writer talked about his past and his passion for dances. He had gone at such an extent for dancing that he could not able to stop himself even taking drugs; just to acquire a complete pleasure of dancing of which he called ecstasy. But time never remains the same, a tragedy took place and an enthusiastic dancing guy of London became paralysed/bed-ridden because of the selfish pleasure of dancing. He was kept under treatment for prolonged period of time .He himself couldnít recall properly what had actually happened to him, except the fact that he was over-dosed. Not just him but his mum, brother and friends had also suffered. Sadly, he was also transferred from walk to wheel-chairs. His extremity of selfish pleasure had ruined/ changed his life forever.

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