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    Please correct

    Dear Administrative Staff,

    In observance of Administrative Professionals Week, this year, on
    April 22nd and April 23rd,the leadership staff has prepared a special event for you as an effort to express our appreciation for your contribution to our organization.

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    Re: Please correct

    Quote Originally Posted by Andie1199 View Post
    Dear Administrative Staff,

    In the observance of Administrative Professionals Week, on
    April 22nd and 23rd of this year, the leadership staff will celebrate a special event for you as an effort to express our appreciation towards your contribution to our organization.
    Hope it works


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    Quote Originally Posted by Andie1199 View Post
    Dear Administrative Staff,

    In ceremony of the Administrative Professionals Week, this year on the
    April 22nd and April 23rd,the Staff Manager has Organised a special event for you, as an effort to express our to appreciation for your contribution to our organization.

    Thanks

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    #4

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    In the observance of Administrative Professionals Week, the leadership staff invites you to a special celebration, April 22 an 23, to express our appreciation for your contributions to our organization.

    (Week does not = April 22 and 23. Are those the dates of the event?)


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    #5

    Re: Please correct

    To express our appreciation for your contributions to our organization, the leadership staff invites you to a special celebration in the observance of 'Administrative Professionals Week,'on April 22-23 this year.


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    #6

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    thank you sounds better


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    #7

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    You are correct susieqq that two day do not equal the week. thank you for your help.


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    #8

    Re: Please correct

    Thank you all for your wonderful revisions!

    I just want to give you a little more information so my message is clear.

    On April 22nd we have organized a group workshop
    On April 23rd we planned a luncheon and then they will recieve certificates for completing the workshop and a gift.

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