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    • Join Date: May 2008
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    #1

    Please urgently correct the sentence

    Sana finally got her driving licence after unlimited fun at licence's office .she forgot to take her glasses and still cleared her eye test without readin a single word...


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    Re: Please urgently correct the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by rija View Post
    Sana finally got her driving licence after unlimited fun at licence's office. She forgot to take her glasses but still passed her eye test without reading a single word...
    What do you mean exactly by "unlimited fun"?


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    #3

    Re: Please urgently correct the sentence

    Unlimted fun means enjoyed


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    #4

    Re: Please urgently correct the sentence

    It's an odd concept, to have unlimited fun when obtaining your licence from the licensing office. Is that really what you meant?


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    Re: Please urgently correct the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by rija View Post
    Sana finally got her driving licence after unlimited fun at licence's office .she forgot to take her glasses and still cleared her eye test without readin a single word...

    I would phrase your sentence like this: "Sana had lots of fun at the licencing office as she finally got her driving licence. Although she forgot to bring her glasses, she still passed her eye examination without making a mistake."

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