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    please correct

    I want to send a letter to employee telling that Dhs.100/ will be deducted from his salary as a punishment for not wearing company uniform: please see below and correct.


    Pleae be informed that Dhs.100/- will be deducted from your salary as punishment for not following the company unifom code.


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    #2

    Re: please correct

    I think everything's correct, but I would take the "as punishment" out because it sounds a little unprofessional.

    Hope I helped.


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    Re: please correct

    I am not a teacher, but I agree that it appears correct, however, I would also take out the "as punishment" and state" in accordance with your Contract" instead but only if the employee has one. If not and he is unaware there would be a deduction if the policy was not clear, I think you are being harsh. I trust this is OK.

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