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    Check My Sentences Please

    You are close to me as much as a breath.

    You are as close to me as a breath.

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    Re: Check My Sentences Please

    Quote Originally Posted by Volcano1985 View Post
    You are close to me as much as a breath.

    You are as close to me as a breath.
    The first is not grammatical. The second is grammatical but awkward. You might try something like:

    -You're so close I can feel your breath.
    -You're only a breath away.

    [I edit copy and have tutored college writing.]

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