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    request guide

    I would like to have a guide on how to request for free product advertisng to be display on ATM screen, can I put it as follow:-

    ATM advertising requests guide

    will it sound confusing with advertise for machine it self ? or please suggest better one. I request those teacher with English as their first language to help me, all are welcome.

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    Re: request guide

    Quote Originally Posted by yeamaozi View Post
    I would like to have a guide on how to request for free product advertisng to be displayed on ATM screen.

    It's not clear there whether the products are free or the advertising is free.

    C
    an I put it as follow:-

    ATM advertising requests guide

    ...and that sounds like the advertising is requesting a guide.

    Will it sound confusing with advertise for machine it self ? or please suggest better one. I request those teacher with English as their first language to help me, all are welcome.
    I'm not a teacher, but I edit copy and have tutored college writing and English is my language.

    Try something like:

    -How to request free ATM ad space

    ...or:

    -How to request ad space for your free products

    ...depending on whether its the ads or products that are free.


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    Re: request guide

    Quote Originally Posted by Charlie Bernstein View Post
    I'm not a teacher, but I edit copy and have tutored college writing and English is my language.

    Try something like:

    -How to request free ATM ad space

    ...or:

    -How to request ad space for your free products

    ...depending on whether its the ads or products that are free.
    How about this: i would like to say a guide for user who wants to place an ads on ATM's screen I will put it this way, does it sound confusing?

    "User's Guide to request for ATM advertising space"

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