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    correct the sentences

    Raju is in Delhi since 2005. He is a mechanic there. Earlier he is inChennai. Now he plans to go abroad.His attempts has been successful so far.


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    Re: correct the sentences

    Raju is in Delhi since 2005. He is a mechanic there. Earlier he is inChennai. Now he plans to go abroad.His attempts has been successful so far.

    Raju has lived in Delhi since 2005, having moved there from Chennai. He is currently working as a mechanic, but plans to go abroad.

    His attempts has been successful so far. :his attempts have been...

    ...but at what?. This sentence doesn't seem to relate to the previous sentences. Successful at being a motor mechanic? But he IS a mechanic, and the sentence says, 'attempts have been successful'.

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