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    #1

    Is it correct? or What is more effective?

    Dear Teacher,

    Is the following objective of one of the departments is correct? Or what is the more effective object to write?

    Department : Maintenance

    Objective : To complete the given TASK successfully in time with high quality work, maintaining 100% of safety and security.

    Thanks in advance.

    Sweetie123


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    Re: Is it correct? or What is more effective?

    "Objective : To complete the given TASK successfully in time with high quality work, maintaining 100% of safety and security."
    Hi,

    I'm new to the forum, so bear with me while I get the hang of things here at UsingEnglish.com.

    How does this grab you:

    "Objective: To successfully complete assigned tasks in a timely manner, and in a way that demonstrates the highest level of quality and maintains absolute levels of safety and security."

    Unless, of course, you actually want to refer to task in the singular (and in all uppercase letters for some unknown reason).

    Greg

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    #3

    Re: Is it correct? or What is more effective?

    Quote Originally Posted by dragn View Post
    Hi,

    I'm new to the forum, so bear with me while I get the hang of things here at UsingEnglish.com.

    How does this grab you:

    "Objective: To successfully complete assigned tasks in a timely manner, and in a way that demonstrates the highest level of quality and maintains absolute levels of safety and security."

    Unless, of course, you actually want to refer to task in the singular (and in all uppercase letters for some unknown reason).

    Greg
    Thanks a lot for the help. It looks great.

    Regards,

    Sweetie123


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    #4

    Re: Is it correct? or What is more effective?

    dragn

    An auspicious entrance into this forum!

    To say 'an impressive post' would be to patronize.

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