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    Enthusiasm

    Hi,

    I am writing something with the word "enthusiasm". Please check and help me to improve it:

    I am grateful to Anna Janky for her respectful enthusiasm showed by critical comments on this project, in particular she gave me enough confidence by placing great emphasis on the potential of the current problems.

    Have a nice day Thank you.


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    Re: Enthusiasm

    Quote Originally Posted by LeUyenHoc View Post
    Hi,

    I am writing something with the word "enthusiasm". Please check and help me to improve it:

    I am grateful to Anna Janky for her respectful enthusiasm showed by critical comments on this project, in particular she gave me enough confidence by placing great emphasis on the potential of the current problems.

    Have a nice day Thank you.
    I am grateful to Anna Janky for her passionate enthusiasm, which her critical comments on this project clearly testify. I also appreciate that she drew our attention to the potentials of the current problems.

  2. #3

    Re: Enthusiasm

    Thank you for your suggestion.

    Is "potential" a plural noun?

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