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    #1

    serve

    Hi ther
    Please proofread the following sentence:

    The snack bar serves junk food with oil, fat and too much sugar.

    tks
    pete

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    #2

    Re: serve

    Hi peter123

    What about?

    Ex: The snack bar serves junk food that is oily, fatty, and has too much sugar.

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    #3

    Re: serve

    Hi there,

    Tks a lot.

    But is it correct to say like this?

    The snack bar serves junk food with too much oil, fat and sugar.

    tks
    pete

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    #4

    Re: serve

    The snack bar serves junk food made with too much oil, fat and sugar.

    or

    The snack bar serves junk food containing too much oil, fat and sugar.

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