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    how to phrase it correct

    Dear teacher,

    I have written the below sentence, someone read it and he told me he doesn't understand my english, please point out the problems in my sentance. Thanks.

    "good criticisms look like not welcome here, hard truth is hard to swallow for some and no improvement can one have until he/she did just that. "

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    Re: how to phrase it correct

    I think I can replace the word "look" with "seem".

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    Re: how to phrase it correct

    Quote Originally Posted by jeff so View Post
    Dear teacher,

    I have written the below sentence, someone read it and he told me he doesn't understand my english, please point out the problems in my sentance. Thanks.

    "good criticisms look like not welcome here, hard truth is hard to swallow for some and no improvement can one have until he/she did just that. "
    Dear teacher

    I wrote :

    " no improvement can one xxxx until he/she did just that." should I use has or have ?

    thanks

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