Interested in Language
Would you please give your ideas about the following poem?
I am following the book theories,
Walking around so long years
That failed to prove realities,
Keep me wandering about others.
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Many thanks for your reply.
Your paraphrase is similar to my mean.
Dose my poem have any mistakes? Would you please tell me how you feel about the poem?