No. A comma splice joins two unrelated sentences: 'Yesterday I went to Brighton, I like it there'. This is wrong.
The New York Times excerpt you quoted doesn't do this. It lists global economic problems. Some writers might prefer to use semi-colons, and some most definitely wouldn't. But there is no comma splice.
Incidentally, your first proposed rewrite isn't a sentence at all; it has no finite verb.
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