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    please help me correct the sentence

    1) The attachment photos of the students are arranged according to the order on the above list.
    2) The chairs will be arrange according to the layout plan.
    3) I will laydown the groundwork for my kid to carry out my plan.
    4) My job is to laydown the groundwork for the concert and to facilitate the team.
    4) Not every body judges pain by the same standard.
    5) I really have to strain to look at the plane properly.

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    Re: please help me correct the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) The attachment photos of the students are arranged according to the order on the above list.
    2) The chairs will be arranged according to the layout plan.
    3) I will lay down the groundwork for my kid (child/son/daughter)to carry out my plan.
    4) My job is to lay down the groundwork for the concert and to facilitate the team.
    4) Not everybody judges pain by the same standard.
    5) I really have to strain to look at the plane properly.
    I am not a teacher.


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    Re: please help me correct the sentence

    1) The attachment photos of the students are arranged according to the order on the above list.
    2) The chairs will be arrange according to the layout plan.
    3) I will laydown the groundwork for my kid to carry out my plan.
    4) My job is to laydown the groundwork for the concert and to facilitate the team.
    4) Not every body judges pain by the same standard.
    5) I really have to strain to look at the plane properly.
    here are some suggestions of mine. Hope anyone else can give better correction if possible.

    1) the attached photos of the students are arranged in the order of the above list.
    2) the chairs will be arranged according to the layout plan.
    3) i will lay down on the groundwork with my kid and carry out my plan.
    4) my task is to lay down on the groundwork during the concert and to facilitate (this word is not good but i cant find a better word to replace it) the team.
    4) no one judges pain in the same way.
    5) i really have to strain my eyes to look at the plane clearly.

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    Re: please help me correct the sentence

    Quote Originally Posted by tracyloan View Post
    here are some suggestions of mine. Hope anyone else can give better correction if possible.

    1) the attached photos of the students are arranged in the order of the above list.
    2) the chairs will be arranged according to the layout plan.
    3) i will lay down on the groundwork with my kid and carry out my plan. Don't use the "on"
    4) my task is to lay down on the groundwork during the concert and to facilitate (this word is not good but i cant find a better word to replace it) the team's effort. facilitate is a good word in this instance.
    4) no one judges pain in the same way.
    5) i really have to strain my eyes to look at the plane clearly.
    Don't forget that all sentences must start with a capital letter.
    Also, even though kid is in the dictionary, I find using child better when written.

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