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when I was a child I collected all my unforgettable stuffs and put them in a small wooden box. I hid this box since many years ago and forgot its place .
one day when I cleaned my room I found my small box and I was surprised to find it in a good case . I was so eager to know Its contents and to recover my old beautiful things .
in that box I found some of my memorials which are took me on a trip to the early years of my life. One of these memorials was my little white dress. It was a gift from my uncle who had bought it from U.S.A because of his study . it's the first dress I wore when I was born. In fact it's the best memorial for me.
I also found my first certificate that I had got with a gift which was a beautiful toy from my kindergarten . I hung my certificate on our living room to be visual for the all. I couldn't forget that my family's happiness and their gifts for me in a small party which was included the rest of successful children in our family. I was delighted when I shown my certificate to the other because it's the first step on my scientific life.
The last thing I had found is my picture with my cousin when we made a party and made a large cake which was took a rabbit shape . we invited our friends to that party .we played and enjoyed together. We got a enthusiastic competitions and fun time. at the end of that party we took a lot of photos as a memorial.
However , I'm really happy and delighted to find these memorials because they represent my beautiful child hood .
i'll be obligated fo any one will help me..
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HI.. my teacher..
How much I obliged for u ..!!
I'll follow your instraction as well as i can..
thanks alot .. I haven't any other words can express my thank
Last edited by gzool; 03-May-2009 at 00:46.
I agree with gzool
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