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I'd like you to tell me if the following is OK:
One year ago Jane's first crossword saw the light of day, and was soon tackled by her most brilliant students.
Need I have a subject in the second sentence as well ('it')?
'...., and it was soon tackled...'?
Should I use a comma after 'One year ago,...'?
Thanks for your prompt reply.
In the same sentence:
One year ago, Jane's first crossword saw the light of day,and soon afterwars her brilliant students tackled it.
Is the comma after 'day' is OK?
Normally, a coordinating conjunction, which joins two independent clauses, is preceded by a comma.