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    Post Could you help me make it?

    Hello everybody, I have been thinking for a long time what could I write to my cousins girlfriend,She's from New Zealand but she's coming to my country, to take a small holiday, in my cousin home,I already talked to her a few times on the phone but my english is like hell as you can see I'm confused,I'm 15 years old, well my dream? live in England or in New Zealand I love them,but I need speak fluent english. Well I already spoke so much, Do you would like to help me make a text for her? Yeap? so on write your text here and we will see your vocabulary,teacher come here and make too! I'd like to see a experienced text with advanced words I would be very glad if you help me.

    thank you in advance.

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    Re: Could you help me make it?

    anyone? :P


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    Re: Could you help me make it?

    Quote Originally Posted by ekx View Post
    anyone? :P
    I think people would be happy to critique any text that you write yourself but they do not want to write for you, in fact, they can't write anything but generalities on your behalf, so it is best all around for you to write your own letter and post it here.

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    Re: Could you help me make it?

    Dear Silly, how's it going? when will you come? I hope meet you someday though you won't stay here for a long time or you gonna? my cousin told me about you, you really looks awesome, actually my cousin is a lucky guy and if you need some swedish help you can count me to help you okay? I'm sorry for my english mistakes, ahah then see you soon :)

    What you guys think? How could I improve this text?

    thank you !


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    #5

    Re: Could you help me make it?

    "Cyrano de Bergerac! Calling Mr. de Bergerac!"

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    Re: Could you help me make it?

    Quote Originally Posted by David L. View Post
    "Cyrano de Bergerac! Calling Mr. de Bergerac!"
    I'm sorry I didn't understand, can you explain?

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