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Hello everybody, I have been thinking for a long time what could I write to my cousins girlfriend,She's from New Zealand but she's coming to my country, to take a small holiday, in my cousin home,I already talked to her a few times on the phone but my english is like hell as you can see I'm confused,I'm 15 years old, well my dream? live in England or in New Zealand I love them,but I need speak fluent english. Well I already spoke so much, Do you would like to help me make a text for her? Yeap? so on write your text here and we will see your vocabulary,teacher come here and make too! I'd like to see a experienced text with advanced words I would be very glad if you help me.
thank you in advance.
Dear Silly, how's it going? when will you come? I hope meet you someday though you won't stay here for a long time or you gonna? my cousin told me about you, you really looks awesome, actually my cousin is a lucky guy and if you need some swedish help you can count me to help you okay? I'm sorry for my english mistakes, ahah then see you soon :)
What you guys think? How could I improve this text?
thank you !
"Cyrano de Bergerac! Calling Mr. de Bergerac!"