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  1. phoebe_88
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    Question Please make some corrections on my sentences.

    Anyway, what is the model number of the laptop that you are interested into?

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    Re: Please make some corrections on my sentences.

    Quote Originally Posted by phoebe_88 View Post
    Anyway, what is the model number of the laptop that you are interested into?
    1..."on my sentences" is not correct. "on" is wrong, and you have only one sentence that you are asking about.
    2...Because you don't know if your sentence has any mistakes, it is better to say 'Please correct any mistakes in my sentence.'

    3...Anyway, what is the model number of the laptop you are interested in? (not "interested into")

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