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    Post Kindly correct my sentences

    As you are aware, I paid in full the loans referenced above on 10.12.08 & 12.01.09 with amount of $ xxxxx and $ xxxxx respectively

    I would appreciate return of the deed to the property held as collateral for these loans

    Thank you for your kind cooperation in this regard

    Sincerely

    (SD)

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    Smile Re: Kindly correct my sentences

    I paid in full,the...

    Deeds,instead of deed.

    comma after, thank you.


    I am not a teacher but this feels right.

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