Student or Learner
As you are aware, I paid in full the loans referenced above on 10.12.08 & 12.01.09 with amount of $ xxxxx and $ xxxxx respectively
I would appreciate return of the deed to the property held as collateral for these loans
Thank you for your kind cooperation in this regard
I paid in full,the...
Deeds,instead of deed.
comma after, thank you.
I am not a teacher but this feels right.