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    #1

    Check my sentences please

    The news was like a sharp knife which cut his heart into two pieces
    Achieving success is not a tough task but to survive it is
    Always be calm when success kisses your feet and stand like a rock when defeat kicks your ash
    Always go beyond your capability but (not) capacity.

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    Re: Check my sentences please

    The news was like a sharp knife which cut his heart into two pieces
    (Achieving success) is not (a tough task) (but to survive it) is (a tough task)
    Always be calm when success kisses your feet and stand like a rock when defeat kicks your ash
    Always go beyond your capability but never your capacity.

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