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    #1

    can someone help me to correct these sentences..

    1) I have been using this laptop for a few months so is too soon to tell if it is a good laptop. Most of the time, laptop's problem will only occur after a year.
    2) He could turn a unprofitable business into a profitable business.
    3) She could use that as a good publicity for herself.

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    Re: can someone help me to correct these sentences..

    Quote Originally Posted by scott833 View Post
    1) I have been using this laptop for a few months so is too soon to tell if it is a good laptop. Most of the time, laptop's problem will only occur after a year.
    2) He could turn a unprofitable business into a profitable business.
    3) She could use that as a good publicity for herself.
    1) As per my understanding: Most of the time, laptop's fail to function properly after 1 year, hence it is difficult to decide which is good and dad at the time of purchase.
    2) He could turn his unprofitable business into Profitable business.
    3) she could that for her better publicity

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