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    A statement correction

    "Changes in the method of managing the welfare institution in order to achieve mandatory (obligatory?) standards by the example of...(the name of the institution)"

    Can anybody correct the statement above?
    Thanks in advance.

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    Re: A statement correction

    Quote Originally Posted by Unregistered View Post
    "Changes in the method of managing the welfare institution in order to achieve mandatory (obligatory?) standards by the example of...(the name of the institution)"

    Can anybody correct the statement above?
    Thanks in advance.
    You'll need to complete the sentence first. So far you have:
    Changes in A in order to achieve B according to C ....
    Changes in the method of managing the welfare institution in order to achieve the mandatory standards of Institution C ...
    But there is no verb for the subject "changes" yet.

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