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    #1

    correct this paragraph please

    hi can you help me ?
    are there any mistakes in this paragraph?

    Japan is affected by marine currents,such as Japan and south stream,who works on the coast ,which is heating.and the trend Ooiaochu north,who works on the cool east coast of the island of Hokkaido and northern Honshu.sweeping Japan several typhoons each year, especially with the end of the summer and early fall,causing heavy rains and strong winds caused damage associated with large houses and crops. the cherry flowers is evidence of the arrival of spring in Japan.

    I know there are so many mistakes
    I have corrected them, but I want to make sure from native speakers please don't ignore my post. answer as fast as you can.

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    #2

    Re: correct this paragraph please

    Please post your corrected version, and then someone will tell you if it's correct.


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    #3

    Re: correct this paragraph please

    here is my correct version:

    Japan is affected by marine currents such as south stream which works on the coast,and Ooiaochu north which works on the east coast of Hokkaido island and northern Honshu. Several typhoons sweep Japan each year especially at the end of summer and early fall causing heavy rain and strong wind that damage large houses and crops. The cherry flowers are an evidence of spring arrival in Japan.

    by the way, Idon't know any thing about Japan's Islands or the currents.Iam not sure about the Islands names and the information in this paragraph. someone gave it to me to correct it. so Iam a little confused. now would you please correct it for me as fast as you can ?

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    #4

    Re: correct this paragraph please

    Japan is affected by the marine currents. Japan and south stream are heating and these work on the coast. The Ooiaochu North trend works on the cool east coast of the islands of Hokkaido and Northern Honshu. Typhoons sweep through Japan each year, especially at the end of the ssummer and early fall. This causes heavy rains and strong winds which damage large houses and crops.

    Cherry flowers are evidence of the arrival of spring in Japan.



    I think this is what that paragraph meant?


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    #5

    Re: correct this paragraph please

    thank you for your quick response

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