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    Writing a letter

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am planning to respond to a rejection letter, I wonder if it sounds correct in grammar and sentence structure? -

    "Although I am disappointed that I wasn't chosen for a phone interview, I have so far enjoyed talking to people and learning about xxxxxx and, in doing further research, your company is exemplary in the field.

    ........ I want to let you know that if, for some reasons, the person(s) that you have offered did not work out, I would welcome the opportunity to talk with you further"

    Is there anything wrong about the sentences above?

    Tahanks.


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    Hmm... "in doing further research" seems to imply that you didn't do enough initial research before you applied to have known what a wonderful company it was until you found out you wouldn't get the interview. Might be better to say: All of the research I've done has shown me that your company is exemplary in the field.

    I assume that the "........" indicate a middle section that you are not sharing or do not need advice about. The last sentence would be better: I want to let you know that if, for any reason, the person(s) that you have chosen to interview do not work out, I would welcome the opportunity to talk with you further.

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