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    When we are sick, we go to the doctor, when...

    Hello.

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    When we are sick, we go to the doctor, when we need social care we go to the council.

    Isn't this grammatically correct?
    Don't you write: "When we are sick, we go to the doctor. When we need social care, we go to the council."?

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    Re: When we are sick, we go to the doctor, when...

    Hello Daruma,

    1. When we are sick, we go to the doctor, when we need social care we go to the council.

    This is grammatical, but poorly punctuated. Your version is much better.

    Alternatively, you could use a semi-colon instead of a full stop, after "doctor".

    Best wishes,

    MrP

    Not a professional ESL teacher.

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