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    Please correct my text

    Please refer the latest shipment date shown in our PO to planning your production instead of requested the vessel schedule to plan it. Please fulfill your commitment and provide your production start date and expect finish date today.

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    Re: Please correct my text

    Quote Originally Posted by Zoe2008 View Post
    Please refer the latest shipment date shown in our PO to planning your production instead of requested the vessel schedule to plan it. Please fulfill your commitment and provide your production start date and expect finish date today.
    Dear Zoe:

    Please refer to the latest shipment date* on our PO, not the vessel schedule, when planning your production schedule. Please fulfill your commitment and provide both your production start date and anticipated finish date today.**

    I hope this is helpful,

    Petra

    PS:
    * Do you mean that on your PO's there is a date which indicates the latest allowable date for shipping? If so, you could say: Please refer to the latest allowable shipment date as indicated on our PO, not the vessel schedule...
    **If the commitment you refer to is the provision of the two dates, you could say: Please fulfill your commitment by providing both your production start date and anticipated finish date today.

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