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    Sentence correction

    Hello, wow would you correct the following sentence?

    "His stories are about a boy called Steve Smith, born in the year 2500 and has supernatural abilities."

    a) "His stories are about a boy called Steve Smith, who is born in the year 2500 and has supernatural abilities."

    or

    b) His stories are about a boy called Steve Smith, born in the year 2500 with supernatural abilities."


    Thanks

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    Re: Sentence correction

    What about?

    His stories are about a boy, Steve Smith, born in the year 2500 who has supernatural abilities.

    His stories are about Steve Smith, a boy born in the year 2500 who has supernatural abilities.

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