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    Plz correct if it has mistakes. Thanks!

    I see thousands of people saying they r not happy, despite having all things they r unsatisfied from life, every time missing something whether wealth, love, peace and many more but on the contrary i have seen few peope too who have nothing special nor luxurious but they don't disgruntle and they r fully satisfied and happy even suffring. The reason is behind that they know the fact of life.

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    Re: Plz correct if it has mistakes. Thanks!

    Hi,

    Here are some general points:
    1. You need to write in sentences - this is one, giant run-on without clear breaks.
    2. Do NOT use "r" for "are" or any other abbreviations you would use to send a text message when you are writing an essay, and remember to capitalize the word "I."

    If you rewrite your essay and break it up into sentences, I'm sure someone can help with the other issues.

    {not a teacher}


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    Re: Plz correct if it has mistakes. Thanks!

    Thanks for your reply but you could help me by checking my grammar too.

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    Lightbulb Re: Plz correct if it has mistakes. Thanks!

    I see thousands of people saying they are not happy despite having all things. They are unsatisfied in their life, every time missing something like wealth, love, peace and many more. On the contrary, I have seen few peope who have nothing special and nor they are luxurious, but they don't disgruntle and they are fully satisfied and happy even suffring. The reason is behind that they know the fact of life.
    {ESL Teacher Peshawar Pakistan}

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