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    rephrasing of five sentences

    Dear teachers,

    Would you be kind enough to check my attempt for rephrasing of the following sentences?

    1.1.The children would not think of any game in the house therefore they decided to go for a walk.
    1.2.The children would not think of any indoor amusement therefore they decided to go for a walk.

    2.1. He is a fine player and I think that our performance will be a success.
    2.2. He is a fine actor and I think that our performance will be a success.

    3.1. He took the rifle, fired and hit the aim.
    3.2. He took the rifle, shot and hit the aim.

    4.1. When I lifted my bow I saw that the audience was sitting breathless watching my hands.
    4.2. When I raised my bow I saw that the audience was sitting breathless watching my hands.

    5.1. The performance was successful and the little actors and actresses were extremely happy.
    5.2. The performance was a success and the little actors and actresses were extremely happy.

    Thank you for your efforts.

    Regards,

    V.
    Last edited by vil; 10-Jun-2009 at 20:16.

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    Re: rephrasing of five sentences

    Quote Originally Posted by vil View Post
    dear teachers,

    would you be kind enough to check my attempt for rephrasing of the following sentences?

    1.1.the children could not think of any game in the house therefore they decided to o for a walk.
    1.2.the children could not think of any indoor amusement therefore they decided to go for a walk.
    r.

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