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    #1

    proofread

    Hi there,
    please proofread the following sentences.

    1. Comparing the merits and demerits of travelling alone, I would prefer joining a travel tour because it costs less.

    2. Compared with the figures last year, this year see a sharp increase in profits.

    3. Based on the information mentioned earlier, I would prefer travelling alone.

    tks
    pete


    • Join Date: May 2008
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    #2

    Re: proofread

    1. Considering the merits and demerits of travelling alone, I would prefer a less expensive travel tour.

    2. Compared with last year's figures, this year sees a sharp increase in profits.

    3. Based on the information mentioned earlier, I would prefer travelling alone.
    Good to me.

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