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    Could you give me some ideas to write it better?

    "Actually we have sent him a simple carton mark made by us."My boss asked me to write this sentense for him in an email, but it seemed to have something wrong. Could you give me some ideas to write it better?

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    Re: Could you give me some ideas to write it better?

    Quote Originally Posted by marieuni View Post
    "Actually we have sent him a simple carton mark made by us."My boss asked me to write this sentense for him in an email, but it seemed to have something wrong. Could you give me some ideas to write it better?
    I don't quite understand what you meant by "carton mark". Carton is the container made of paperboard, but what's a "carton mark"?
    Anyway, I think the present perfect tense is unnecessary here, so I would say: "we sent him a simple carton mark made by us"

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