Student or Learner
Please, let me know if I already can schedule your visit for July 1st.
Please bear in mind that if you take too long to decide, we may not be able to find a good date anymore.
In Canada, we can use already in this case in the following fashion:
Please let me know if I can already schedule your visit....
Please, let me know if I can schedule your visit for July 1st yet.
Please, let me know if I can schedule your visit yet for July 1st.
Do you delete the commas?
Thanks a lot.
Are the sentences clearly written by a foreigner?
Is there a chance of a native to write the original sentences informally?