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    writing advice

    Dear Teacher,

    I started writing my resume for a new position, following a paragraph of my resume:

    "During the past years I have worked as a Supply Chain Manager and as a Purchase Manager for ZZZZ Industries, Which produce and marketing pesticides for the agriculture market locally and globally".

    questions :

    1.0 Is it correct to write " as a".. and "as a", can I remove the article "a" ?

    2.0 is correct to use the pronoun which or it is better to use "that" ?

    3.0 Is it correct to write "marketing" or I should have used "market" ?

    Please advice,


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    Re: writing advice

    ...which produce and market pesticides... this is the only correction needed.

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